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| last night, a la film noir |
 Aug 17 2007, 02:53 PM
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Corrupting the youth of America Group: Members Posts: 528 Joined: 12-May 06 From: Alice, TX Member No.: 176  |
I walked into the establishment. looking around i did not immediately see anyone i knew. The barkeep waved at me and began to ask me what they could do to help my current condition. "ill have the special", she began mixing a concoction that i had enjoyed many times before. the music started to play, and then my aquaintances who had followed me in began to insist that we begin a round of billiards as we wait for the night to wind down. it started out innocently enough, we had no clue the trouble that would arise later as we began to enjoy the slow night. Before i knew it i was out of the game. I had not been paying attention to my shots, i guess stress, or work, or my shattered love life had gotten the best of me once again. then SHE walked by. with dark circles painted about her eyes, and golden hair tied back, screaming of her long day on the job, she began to speak to us, mostly friendly banter about the specials of the night. It was her first night there, and she was beat from the rush of costomers constantly begging for more of their preferred vice. i noticed a tattoo...a small star, just within eyesight between her breasts. another tattoo revealed itself about her midsection, of a peacock feather circling her beltline. everything about her screamed "love me... that is all i want is to be loved" after a few minutes, she, began to go back into the routine of her job and asked what we would like. a slow trickle of sweat had begun on the back of my neck as i placed my order. just one more drink wont hurt. but steadily the drinks kept coming, on the house as it were, and as not to be rude i obliged by drinking them. slowly the lights began to swirl, the floor felt as if it were moving. my aquaintances noticed, and suddenly the shit hit the fan. the golden haired waitress came back to us. The authorities had found us....of all the places in the world they had to be here tonight. i heard a rush of voices, get him out quickly, dont let them see, quickly to the car....and we were off....
i awoke in the shower....not knowing where i was or what had happened....and this is my story. -------------------- Brandon....you're the reason I'm pro-choice.
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Aug 17 2007, 03:00 PM
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 Group: Members Posts: 5,275 Joined: 22-February 06 Member No.: 2 |
you left out the part where you woke up in the shower and your butt hurt
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Aug 17 2007, 03:06 PM
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  Group: Agents Posts: 4,026 Joined: 23-February 06 From: lu-bok Member No.: 41 |
QUOTE A- Go to school B- Ignore C- Kill D- Put it in it appears as if option D has failed. -------------------- 32-bit whore
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Aug 17 2007, 05:11 PM
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 GORILLA FLUFFER Group: Agents Posts: 7,711 Joined: 23-February 06 From: lubbock Member No.: 50 |
yes. for you cavemen who couldn't understand what he said.... we went to speeds like we do every night, got our special drinks that the bartender makes especially for us, played some pool, and then started to pay to get glen shit-hammered. he puked on his bed and on the floor downstairs, was mumbling about "supergirl not gonna like this.." and that he was "gonna kill supergirl". i came back from a friends place at 5:30am, and glen was laying down in the shower, with his matress dragged into the bathroom and propped against the wall.
--------------------  QUOTE (Jessica @ May 7 2007, 01:15 PM)  but yeehaw dammit. YEEHAW QUOTE (Dogmeat @ Jun 26 2008, 07:51 PM) ok once upon a time I jacked myself off retarded. Licking anuses, one kindergarten class at a time!! |
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Aug 17 2007, 05:28 PM
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Corrupting the youth of America Group: Members Posts: 528 Joined: 12-May 06 From: Alice, TX Member No.: 176 |
QUOTE (FORSAKENR320 @ Aug 17 2007, 06:11 PM) yes. for you cavemen who couldn't understand what he said.... we went to speeds like we do every night, got our special drinks that the bartender makes especially for us, played some pool, and then started to pay to get glen shit-hammered. he puked on his bed and on the floor downstairs, was mumbling about "supergirl not gonna like this.." and that he was "gonna kill supergirl". i came back from a friends place at 5:30am, and glen was laying down in the shower, with his matress dragged into the bathroom and propped against the wall. the most glorious moment of my life -------------------- Brandon....you're the reason I'm pro-choice.
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Aug 17 2007, 05:59 PM
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 Oh baby bring me down Group: Agents Posts: 4,115 Joined: 23-February 06 From: Way out yonder Member No.: 68 |
I really miss you!
-------------------- Southern Rock, beer and bears!
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Aug 17 2007, 10:08 PM
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Corrupting the youth of America Group: Members Posts: 528 Joined: 12-May 06 From: Alice, TX Member No.: 176 |
QUOTE (chook @ Aug 17 2007, 06:59 PM) I really miss you! well if you need someone to spoon with next time you visit...... -------------------- Brandon....you're the reason I'm pro-choice.
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Aug 18 2007, 06:43 AM
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 Group: Moderators Posts: 572 Joined: 23-February 06 Member No.: 33 |
commas are important.
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Aug 18 2007, 11:13 PM
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Group: Agents Posts: 4,026 Joined: 23-February 06 From: lu-bok Member No.: 41 |
the internet needs not puncuation all one needs is a thought train and to ride that rail like tony hawk rolling down a staircase banister pulling off a back flip double-decker taco slide while playing the violin it doesnt matter if i am making up all these moves because tony hawk could do it because the trucks of his skateboard actually have some of chuck norris beard trimmings and these give the skateboard superpowers to mock and ridicule the laws of physics we all know chuck norris can do anything and the trimmings bestow upon the wearer the holy might of the beloved bearded one
-------------------- 32-bit whore
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Aug 19 2007, 12:05 PM
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Oh baby bring me down Group: Agents Posts: 4,115 Joined: 23-February 06 From: Way out yonder Member No.: 68 |
QUOTE (TetraGrammaton Cleric @ Aug 18 2007, 07:43 AM) commas are important. Pulp Fiction don't need no commas! -------------------- Southern Rock, beer and bears!
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Aug 22 2007, 05:30 PM
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Corrupting the youth of America Group: Members Posts: 528 Joined: 12-May 06 From: Alice, TX Member No.: 176 |
QUOTE (chook @ Aug 19 2007, 01:05 PM) Pulp Fiction don't need no commas! exactly... -------------------- Brandon....you're the reason I'm pro-choice.
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Sep 14 2007, 02:05 PM
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 Group: Admin Posts: 3,403 Joined: 23-February 06 From: PDX/TXL Member No.: 35 |
Who are these "authorities"?
-------------------- "There is a level of cowardice lower than that of the conformist: that of the fashionable non-conformist." |
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